Siren Story NUMBER 4

By Kasten Hidalgo

Liked the twist at the very end, when she echoes back to her.

A very different kind of Siren, one that captures the protagonist’s point of view, effectively expressing her sense of vulnerability.

What takes you by surprise is the addition or secret of the collar. Potent use of metaphors by Kasten H.

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